Talk:Night Terrors (Doctor Who)/GA1

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 17:52, 10 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Plot: "helped to cope by various habits" Sounds a little funny to me, maybe reword to "helped to cope by utilizing various habits"
- Done. Glimmer721 ^talk 23:55, 10 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Production: "he has young son like Alex" -> "he has a young son like Alex"
- Done. Glimmer721 ^talk 23:55, 10 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Reception: "previous three episodes ("The Unquiet Dead","The Idiot's Lantern" and "Victory of the Daleks")" This is just my personal taste, but I dislike parentheses because I think they look jarring, maybe use a ':' to make a list or insert an emdash
- Added dash. Glimmer721 ^talk 23:55, 10 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
References: Why is there a question mark in the second reference "Smith?, Robert"
- He is referred to as "Robert Smith?" throughout the book--even on the copyright page.[1] I have no clue why. Glimmer721 ^talk 23:55, 10 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Those are the only issues I could find. Very solid article. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 23:06, 10 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Everything should be taken care of now. Thanks for reviewing! Glimmer721 ^talk 23:55, 10 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

That question mark issue is really bizarre. Anywho, looks great now. Passing.--Gen. Quon (talk) 23:57, 10 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I think it might just be a joke. Although not a very obvious one. Glimmer721 ^talk 00:11, 11 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]