Talk:Nigel Savage

A fact from Nigel Savage appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 23 November 2022 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that environmental activist Nigel Savage created Hazon after googling "Jewish food movement" and receiving zero search results?

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 13:55, 16 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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... that environmental activist Nigel Savage created Hazon after googling "Jewish food movement" and receiving zero search results? Source: https://forward.com/food/194272/jewish-food-programs-are-growing-says-new-report/
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- Comment: Template:Did you know nominations/Erick Russell

Created by Coin945 (talk). Self-nominated at 23:36, 5 November 2022 (UTC).[reply]

Reviewing...New enough, long enough, interesting, will complete soon. Whispyhistory (talk) 06:36, 11 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
... Hook in article, followed by inline citation to reference containing hook fact. Copyvio suggests could do with some minor paraphrasing here and there and awaiting QPQ. @Coin945: Thanks Whispyhistory (talk) 10:32, 11 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

(edit conflict) The article is new enough and long enough, and is adequately sourced. Still waiting on a QPQ. The hook is intriguing to non-specialists, and is both cited inline and verified in the source. I'm not sure though if "Legacy" is a good section title considering he's still alive, not to mention the "Notes" section is empty. On the other hand, Earwigs, although giving a green score, showed this link and the article does appear to have some slight paraphrasing of that source, so that needs to be addressed. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 11:37, 11 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I see that Whispyhistory already made a review, however I edit conflicted, and not wanting to put my intended review to waste, I'll leave it here as a comment. I will however defer to Whispyhistory on whether or not the article is ready. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 11:37, 11 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for you reviews @Whispyhistory: and @Narutolovehinata5:. I will do the following. I will ping you when these tasks have been completed. --Coin945 (talk) 13:34, 11 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Complete QPQ - Done.
Review 'Legacy' section. - Done.
Remove Notes section. (I included one note using the 'Refn' template, which I thought would move it to Notes, but it decided to sit in the References section instead.) - Done.
Review and paraphrase content from https://hazon.org/about/nigel/ - Done.

Thank you Narutolovehinata5 and @Coin945:. QPQ done (just need to sign it). No copyvio issues and the rest adjusted. Whispyhistory (talk) 05:18, 14 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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This article reads like an advert. Hazon working conditions have been extremely controversial and the org has been sued repeatedly by former employees. Nigel’s role in these should be mentioned. 71.212.114.203 (talk) 23:47, 2 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]