Talk:Nicole Kidman/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 02:12, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:12, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good, but for the lead, see WP:LEADCITE.

 Done

• Be consistent in this article on the capitalization of "Goodwill ambassador".

 Done I believe I've fixed all instances of "Goodwill Ambassador" capitalization already, but if I did miss any, please do point them out. Film Enthusiast (talk) 06:16, 6 May 2021 (UTC)

Early life

• "in halls" → "in the halls"

 Done

Career

• Several paragraph-ending sentences lack sources.

 Done

• "which threatens" → "that threatens"

 Done

• Shouldn't it be "with a US$16–17 million per-film price tag"?

 Done

• "December, 11 2020" → "11 December 2020" (consistency)

 Done

Acting style and legacy

• This section could use an expansion.

 Done I believe I've expanded this section enough already. Though I'll gladly continue to add to it if I find any more information. Film Enthusiast (talk) 07:36, 7 May 2021 (UTC)

Personal life

• Remove the comma after "Lenny Kravitz in 2003".

 Done

• Some sentences here also lack sources.

 Done

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Could it be possible for you to specify which ones please? I can't seem to find any sentences missing sources from my end. I feel like it's all pretty much covered. But it might just be my eyes. Film Enthusiast (talk) 06:16, 6 May 2021 (UTC)

I think you got it. Forgot where exactly since my first review but I see now that it's all sourced. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:37, 11 May 2021 (UTC)

• "In the beginning" → "At the beginning"

 Done

Acting credits and awards

• This section looks good.

Discography

• "Gold by Australian" → "Gold by the Australian"

 Done

• "Netherlands" → "the Netherlands"

 Done

• Made WP:CITEBUNDLES for sentences with four or more sources.

 Done I also merged citations from other sections as well. Film Enthusiast (talk) 00:21, 8 May 2021 (UTC)

References

• Properly cite sources.

• Several citations are missing authors/websites/dates.

• Avoid using ALL-CAPS per WP:ALLCAPS and WP:SHOUT.

 Done

• Avoid using additional templates in citations other than "cite".

• New York Post (#138) is not reliable per WP:NYPOST.

 Done

• Also avoid having ".com" in the website parameters.

• Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".

 Done

• Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".

• Mark references from Time with "|url-access=limited".

• Mark references from Vanity Fair with "|url-access=limited".

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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