Talk:Nick Thurston
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[edit]This article has a great lead paragraph with good introductory information. Use of Wiki formatting is seen here. No errors found. Author meets criteria for NPOV and NOR. An improvement would be an addition of a few images.
Problem: this is not the right Nick Thurston! http://www.nickthurston.info/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by 129.21.139.101 (talk) 21:46, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
Comments from Jxu2881 - good content but lacks Wiki formatting and has some grammar errors.
- Words such as "finally", "liberated", and "accomplished" violate NPOV.
- Use double brakets like this to hyperlink other wikipedia articles that should be linked in your research.
- include indie film names in content, especially because they are not listed elsewhere
- When just referring to him by one name, use "Thurston", not "Nick".
- The first two paragraphs lack citations and the sources tab is misformatted.
- watch redundance and awkward sentence structure. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jxu2881 (talk • contribs) 21:48, 6 October 2015 (UTC)