Talk:Nick Kerbawy

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Review: August 23, 2023. (Reviewed version).

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A fact from Nick Kerbawy appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 7 October 2022 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Nick Kerbawy did not receive his college tennis championship trophy until 14 years after winning it?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2022/October. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Nick Kerbawy.

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 23:53, 1 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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... that Nick Kerbawy did not receive his college tennis championship trophy until 14 years after winning it? Source: "A Slight Delay" by UPI, May 17, 1949 ("In 1935, Nick Kerbawy won the Michigan normal tennis championship. Apparently there was some delay in delivery of the trophy. It didn't show up until yesterday.")
- ALT1 ... that Nick Kerbawy served as a general manager in both the NFL and NBA? Source: [1]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Shaun Aguano

Moved to mainspace by BeanieFan11 (talk). Self-nominated at 18:18, 15 September 2022 (UTC).[reply]

Article is new enough (created 9/7) and long enough. Appears policy compliant, reads well, thoroughly cited, and Earwig detects nothing nefarious. Hook is short enough and cited in-line. The hook relates to a campus tennis championship and is OK (the 14-year delay gives it some oomph). If the creator wants to craft an alt hook drawing on Kerbawy's diverse background as a general manager in both the NFL and NBA might be better, I'd be willing to come back and check it out. (Has anyone else in history ever been a GM in both NBA and NFL?) The only thing preventing a green tick is the QPQ which needs to be done. Cbl62 (talk) 00:42, 16 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- @Cbl62: I've reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Shaun Aguano as a QPQ and added an ALT1 hook based on your suggestion. BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:40, 19 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Both hooks approved. Let the promoter choose which is best. Cbl62 (talk) 18:05, 19 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:28, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 02:42, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 02:42, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Recommend adding in that he was a three-time NFL champion with the Lions in the lead.

Biography

He also attended Michigan Normal College (now known as Eastern Michigan University), and played tennis there, winning the 1935 championship, although he did not receive the trophy until 1949. -> He also attended Michigan Normal College (now known as Eastern Michigan University) where he won the 1935 tennis championship, although he did not receive the trophy until 1949.
In c. June 1948 if it actually happened in June 1948, you don't need the circa. If it was around that time, I would recommend rewording to something more general, like "In the middle of 1948"
After McMillin was fired in the 1951 season -> during the 1951 season
best teams in the 1950s: no need for the colon, just end with a period and start the new sentence.
championship in 17 years, and the second time overall. no comma needed
However, Kerbawy helped build the Lions back up in the next season, and helped them win nine games and place second in their conference, narrowly missing the playoffs by a half-game the repetition of "help" is clunky. Maybe next season; the team won nine games and placed second in their conference?
Kerbawy was fired from his positions after just three seasons, in January 1961. -> Kerbawy was fired from his positions in January 1961 after just three seasons

References

Ref #25 needs an access-date
Spot checks:
- Ref #1 looks good.
- Ref #3 looks good.
- Ref #3 and 4 are the same article, printed in different newspapers. Same UPI article published the same day. Just choose one and delete the other.
- Ref #7 looks good.
- Ref #13 looks good.
- Ref #18 looks good.
- Ref #24 looks good.
- Ref #28 looks good.

Images

Image is non-free, but rationale looks good.

Nice work, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:52, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007: I believe I've addressed all of the issues. Thank you for your reviews! BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:49, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Looks good, passing. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:27, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.