Talk:Next to You (Chris Brown song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk2me) 06:19, 23 June 2011 (UTC)
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
- "Brown first revealed plans to collaborate with Bieber..." - Instead of "Bieber" make it "Justin Bieber"; wiki-link if necessary
- Named him earlier. Adabow (talk · contribs) 04:57, 24 June 2011 (UTC)
- "...which accompanied the release of his 3D documentary/concert film, Justin Bieber: Never Say Never." - This part is not necessary to this article
- Done. Adabow (talk · contribs) 04:57, 24 June 2011 (UTC)
- "...the chord progression of E♭–B♭–Cm–A♭ - Needs a period at the end of the sentence
- Done. Adabow (talk · contribs) 04:57, 24 June 2011 (UTC)
- "Furthermore, Charley Rogulewski called the song..." - Specify who Rogulewski is
- Done. Adabow (talk · contribs) 04:57, 24 June 2011 (UTC)
- "Jon Caramanica of The New York Times the song didn't compliment..." - Doesn't make sense
- Fixed. Adabow (talk · contribs) 04:57, 24 June 2011 (UTC)
- "On the week ending April 9, 2011, due to digital sales after the release of F.A.M.E., "Next 2 You" debuted on the US Billboard Hot 100 and the Canadian Hot 100." - Put date at the end of the sentence to make it more clear
- Done. Adabow (talk · contribs) 04:57, 24 June 2011 (UTC)
- "It spent one week on the chart.[17] although it has yet to be released as a single." - Fix grammar and put source at end of sentence
- Removed WP:CRYSTAL stuff. Adabow (talk · contribs) 04:57, 24 June 2011 (UTC)
- "...has been released on 17th June 2011 via VEVO." - Fix date format
- The second part of the "Music video" section does not have any sources, making it violate WP:NOR
- Music video synopsi do not need references, however as it was only premiered a few days ago I will expand and reference the section some more. Adabow (talk · contribs) 04:57, 24 June 2011 (UTC)
- The article does not contain any images to illustrate the article
- There are no free images able to illustrate components of the article. It does, however, contain a non-free audio snippet. Adabow (talk · contribs) 04:57, 24 June 2011 (UTC)
There are a lot of things that need to be fixed. Most of the mistakes are simple mistakes that can be fixed quickly. That is why I am putting the article on hold until the problems can be fixed for good article status. - Rp0211 (talk2me) 07:04, 23 June 2011 (UTC)
- Candy seems busy IRL, so I have fixed the issues you pointed out. Please do not make a decision to list or fail the article yet, as the music video is new and the article needs some touching up in that section. Adabow (talk · contribs) 04:57, 24 June 2011 (UTC)
- Most of the mistakes have been fixed. Because of the music video section, I am not passing this article quite yet. Be aware that because of the policy GAN#On_hold, I generally only have one week to pass or fail a good article nomination. Therefore, if all problems are not addressed during the seven days, the article may have to be failed in this nomination. - Rp0211 (talk2me) 06:25, 24 June 2011 (UTC)
- How is it now? Adabow (talk · contribs) 08:34, 24 June 2011 (UTC)
- With the errors being fixed in this article, I feel confident to pass this article. Please continue to expand the article and find more images if you can. - Rp0211 (talk2me) 22:24, 24 June 2011 (UTC)
- How is it now? Adabow (talk · contribs) 08:34, 24 June 2011 (UTC)
- Most of the mistakes have been fixed. Because of the music video section, I am not passing this article quite yet. Be aware that because of the policy GAN#On_hold, I generally only have one week to pass or fail a good article nomination. Therefore, if all problems are not addressed during the seven days, the article may have to be failed in this nomination. - Rp0211 (talk2me) 06:25, 24 June 2011 (UTC)