Talk:Newark, New Jersey/GA2

GA Review

Pass --Ankit Maity ^Talk _Contribs 06:44, 14 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Ankit Maity (talk · contribs) 16:22, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- Short sections and paragraphs are discouraged.
- A word only needs to be wikilinked once within each section.
- Avoid Peacock Terms, such as "beautiful", "famous", "popular", "well-known", "significant", "important" and "obvious".
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- More sources needed. It is needed wherever marked {{cn}}.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Images need succinct captions.
- An image caption should only end with a full-stop if it forms a complete sentence.
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Everything should be good to go now...

Captions have been tightened, with unnecessary full-stops removed. Redundant wikileaks have been removed. Peacock terms have been removed and rewritten. :Short subsections have been reorganized or merged together. Citations have been provided for all ^{[citation needed]} tags.

If there is anything else necessary to make this a good article, please let me know.--Chimino (talk) 04:40, 10 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Blank sections should be eliminated. See, "Elected officials, past and present" and "Notable residents".--Ankit Maity ^Talk _Contribs 11:35, 11 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done--Chimino (talk) 14:07, 11 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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