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Reviewer: Racepacket (talk) 00:29, 8 January 2011 (UTC) This is obviously the product of careful work. No disamb. links or broken links.[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    what does "near the neighborhood of Lincoln Park" mean? In what neighborhood is the 33-33A junction located?
    Removed not because it's bad wording, but because that name is rarely used anymore. – TMF 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    "NY 33A progresses onward, heading northeast through a residential neighborhood"->"NY 33A progresses northeast through a residential neighborhood"
    Done, with a slight modification. – TMF 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    "The activity is mostly centered around Westgate Plaza, a large shopping plaza featuring a Wal-Mart at the junction of Chili Avenue, Howard Road[3] (unsigned NY 940L and formerly part of NY 47[4][5]) and Brooks Avenue."->"The businesses are centered around Westgate Plaza, a large shopping plaza featuring a Wal-Mart, that is at the junction of Chili Avenue, Howard Road[3] (unsigned NY 940L and formerly part of NY 47[4][5]) and Brooks Avenue."
    Reworded. – TMF 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
    Are there any plans for future construction or improvements?
    If there were any substantial future plans, they would be in the article already. – TMF 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    Nice photos. Thank you for donating them.
    The first one isn't mine; it's from a Flickr user. – TMF 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    I am placing the article on hold.

Congratulations. Racepacket (talk) 16:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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