Talk:New Jersey Route 37/GA1
GA Review
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This was a very well-written article, and I found it easy to follow. For the most part, it currently meets the GA criteria. There are a few (mainly cosmetic) things that came up during the review:
- At the end of the second paragraph of the lead and into the third paragraph, three consecutive sentences begin with "Route 37". Can at least one be changed (preferably the middle one) for some variety?
- Use of "then" is frowned upon by many reviewers, and I must admit that it became distracting in the "Route description" section. It is assumed that you are describing the progression of the road, so "then" is usually not necessary.
- Toms River Times and The New York Times should be italicized in the references section.
I will place this nomination on hold to allow for these concerns to be addressed and/or discussed. Any questions and/or comments can be left here, as I have placed this page on my watchlist. Best wishes, GaryColemanFan (talk) 02:42, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- I have gone back and made the suggested changes. Dough4872 (talk) 20:24, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- It looks good now. I am promoting the article. Thanks for your quick response, GaryColemanFan (talk) 20:53, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
- I have gone back and made the suggested changes. Dough4872 (talk) 20:24, 25 October 2008 (UTC)