Talk:New Jersey Route 181/GA2

GA Reassessment

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There are significant prose problems in this article:

Right in the lead, three consecutive sentences begin with the same words.
this time with Route 15 southbound only, where it turns to the northeast and heads into deeper into Jefferson Township - what is it?
The route crosses over the lake a short distance - so it stops halfway across the lake?
Past Lake Hopatcong, the highway is primarily surrounded by dense woodlands and very little development. - redundancy
Residential homes
More repeated words.
makes a sudden spike - wrong word
to the east, north, and west - ! Why not the south?
Route 181 Southbound - should be lowercase S
without the highway turn - huh?
through the development of Sparta - too vague
and into the undeveloped woodlands
coming to a partial trumpet interchange - link?

Please go through and copyedit this as this was just from a cursory look. I will put this on hold for the standard 7 days. --Rs chen 7754 04:21, 2 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Lead fixed. Going through the RD tomorrow. Mitch32^{(The created world is but a small parenthesis in eternity.)} 05:04, 2 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Lead and RD completely rewritten. Mitch32^{(The created world is but a small parenthesis in eternity.)} 16:27, 2 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, that's good enough for me. --Rs chen 7754 03:46, 3 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]