Talk:New Harmony Toll Bridge/GA1
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Reviewer: Admrboltz (talk) 20:10, 30 January 2011 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Comments
[edit]- Article should use a combination of the current infobox and {{infobox bridge}}, see Benton City – Kiona Bridge for an example. - done (although infobox is not a GA criteria).
- The way your noting pages in line is incorrect. I would suggest moving the NHRP reference to a "works cited" then cite page numbers inside ref tags. - done
- "The bridge receives an average of $30,000 per month in tolls and has $22,000 per month in expenses." - wordy -fixed
- "The bridge was placed on the National Register of Historic Places in 2007." - why? - expanded
- Since you are using the NHRP app as a reference, no need to duplicate it in the External links section. - removed
- Things that should be included:
- this suggests that the bridge is needing to be totally replaced - says $2 million in work needed in 2001, and replacement eventually.
- the NBI considers the bridge Structurally Deficient. - added
- this indicates that they were proposing to de-toll the bridge. - I saw that one too, but the states did not want to pick up the maintenance responsibility in 2001, so it never happened.
- The article could really use some images, either of the toll booth or the bridge its self.
- I could not find any images on commons. All images on Flickr were copyrighted.
Thank you for your review. I have left comments under each item. Racepacket (talk)
I will now pass the article. --Admrboltz (talk) 17:57, 31 January 2011 (UTC)