Talk:New Boss/GA1
GA Review
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Excellent work on the article, Hunter! Here is some stuff you need to fix before I can pass the article:
- Add the names of the actors after the characters in the plot section (except for Michael and Charles, since they are mentioned in the lead).
- Done. — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 01:48, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
- "regarding the dress code" – What does this mean?
- Tried to clarify. Better now? — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 01:48, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
- The third paragraph of the production section is trivia and should probably be removed.
- Well, WP:TVMOS says regarding errors, "If there is a major mistake that is discussed by a reliable source it can become a part of the production section." This is obviously sourced and the sources are reliable. Also, I added a new source with the writer's response to it. Between all these things, I think this should stay in Production.
- Ah, I didn't know that. It looks better now.
- Well, WP:TVMOS says regarding errors, "If there is a major mistake that is discussed by a reliable source it can become a part of the production section." This is obviously sourced and the sources are reliable. Also, I added a new source with the writer's response to it. Between all these things, I think this should stay in Production.
- The Wikiquote box links to Golden Ticket (The Office).
- Oops! Fixed. — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 01:48, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
- Websites such as IGN should not be in italics since they are not newspapers or magazines (I have taken care of this, though).
- Thanks for taking care of that! — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 01:48, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
Good luck! :) TheLeftorium 15:42, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
- Everything looks great so I will pass the article now. Congratulations on another GA! ;) TheLeftorium 09:32, 7 April 2009 (UTC)