Talk:Never Too Far/Hero Medley/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk) 22:06, 8 July 2011 (UTC)

• By the way, two of my favorite songs from Mariah Carey. I'll try my best with reviewing, however, if not satisfy with my review. I'll simply ask for a second opinion. Good luck, AJona1992 (talk) 22:06, 8 July 2011 (UTC)

• I'm glad you enjoy them as much as me :) Sure, take your time!--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 22:20, 8 July 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Lead

"co-written and co-produced by the former and Walter Afanasieff" - why is "former" there?

Background and Recording

"During this period, Carey older label" - missing a letter "Carey's"

"having written the former with Jimmy Jam and Terry Lewis" - again, not sure why "former" is stated here?

There For Me

Delink "Walter Afanasieff". Don't really need to link his name two times, we got the idea above this section.

Composition

"In an interview with Fred Bronson, Carey described the her original feelings" - Do you want to remove "the" from this sentence?

Live performances

"to be aired on December 21." - does this mean the special will be airing this year? If not then maybe stating "which aired on December 21 of that same year."

Notes

I'm going to put the article  On hold for further development for seven days. Good luck, AJona1992 (talk) 22:27, 8 July 2011 (UTC)

• Done all :)--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 01:03, 10 July 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for your work on this article. It has now ✓ Pass. Cheers, AJona1992 (talk) 01:33, 10 July 2011 (UTC)