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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:10, 9 December 2019 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:10, 9 December 2019 (UTC)
- @Sturmvogel 66: - can we get this done this week? I'd like to put this to bed in 2019 and next week is slightly busier ;) Parsecboy (talk) 19:06, 16 December 2019 (UTC)
- And right after I nagged you about this, I got hit with some kind of stomach bug that had me mostly bed ridden...that'll show me, eh? Parsecboy (talk) 15:25, 21 December 2019 (UTC)
- More like perfect timing from your wife's POV!
- And right after I nagged you about this, I got hit with some kind of stomach bug that had me mostly bed ridden...that'll show me, eh? Parsecboy (talk) 15:25, 21 December 2019 (UTC)
- One DAB to Pacific Fleet, external links OK
- Fixed - where was the DAB bot when you need it?
- There's still one in the early careers section. Since it's redundant to the one in the lede, you could just get rid of the link instead.
- Done
- There's still one in the early careers section. Since it's redundant to the one in the lede, you could just get rid of the link instead.
- Fixed - where was the DAB bot when you need it?
- Images appropriately licensed. The infobox photo looks washed out, can you fix that?
- I'll see what I can do
- Alright, I darkened it a bit - see how it looks now.
- Better, but a bit too dark, IMO. Not a big deal.
- Tried something else, see if that looks better.
- Alright, I darkened it a bit - see how it looks now.
- I'll see what I can do
- Link foundered in the lede
- Done
- In the infobox link long ton, kW, standard; link and abbreviate nautical miles. Abbreviate indicated hp. Decide on either MW or kW. Round the draft to one significant digit everywhere.
- Should be all done
- Missed standard displacement
- Got it now
- Missed standard displacement
- Should be all done
- Be consistent about capitalizing Standard-type or not.
- Fixed
- Since the deck "thicker" deck
- Done
- Why "return" to steam turbines?
- The New Yorks were both VTE
- I'd forgotten that
- The New Yorks were both VTE
- Comported?
- What's wrong with that?
- Archaic term in that usage, according to my dictionary
- I dunno that it's archaic, but I swapped it out with "aligned" anyway
- Archaic term in that usage, according to my dictionary
- What's wrong with that?
- In design section, link long ton.
- Done
- Copy-paste error with California.
- I don't think that was copy-paste, I think that was me forgetting what ships were in the class
- Was Okie given TE engines for direct comparison with turbines?
- I don't recall Friedman saying as much
- Need to explain /45 nomenclature
- Added the note
- Link elevation, flying-off platform, director
- Done
- Try this link instead: [[Flight deck#Early flight decks|Flying-off platforms]]
- Probably better to just turn it into a redirect to that for future use
- Try this link instead: [[Flight deck#Early flight decks|Flying-off platforms]]
- Done
- They had a 3 in unclear antecedent, "The ships"?
- Done
- uptakes to from
- Fixed
- a series of rolling changes "rolling"?
- I suppose that's not correct in this context
- cite tag in the mod section. If covered by Friedman, remove it.
- Fixed
- Link to the class article for North Dakota and explain why she was scrapped before completion
- Done
- At some point in 1941, she was fitted with an SC air search radar. Which ship?
- Fixed
- Delete the Decommissioned column, kinda misleading as Okie was unavailable long before '44.
- True
- standard type battleships were too slow add hyphen
- Done
- as they were by that time the oldest battleships in service with the US Navy Incorrect. The New Yorks were older
- Doh
- its homeport San Pedro, California to Missing commas
- Fixed
- Ampersand for Prange.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:43, 18 December 2019 (UTC)
- Done
- A few things still to work on.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:35, 21 December 2019 (UTC)
- Done