Talk:Nepal at the 2016 Summer Paralympics

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:36, 20 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Another one. Courcelles (talk) 16:36, 20 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

”Papa-Athletics”? Verify that, please?
”coach for training facilities"? Should that be an 'or'?
Was Rana's time better than his prior one?
"one swimmer to participate in swimming.[" redundant prose.
How old was Kunwar at the time of these games?

Courcelles (talk) 16:43, 20 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Courcelles: Have done all bar how old Kunwar was because it is mentioned in the second sentence of the "Swimming" subsection. MWright96 (talk) 19:45, 20 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- Ny badm I must have glanced right over it. Promoted. Courcelles (talk) 14:29, 21 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]