Talk:Nelly Rivas

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Dates given do not make sense.

This biography says she was born in 1922, but that she was the teenaged mistress of Peron in the "early 1950s". In 1950, if she was born in 1922 she would have been 28 years old, not a teenager.

Obviously something is very wrong with this information.

Confusing prose

The article currently contains the attempted sentence, "The process prescribed in 1971 whilst Perón was negotiating with the de facto president Alejandro Agustín Lanusse the legalization of the Partido Justicialista." If anyone can diagram this sentence or guess what it is supposed to mean, I would ask them to rewrite it; of the two references, the one that has a url is a broken link. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2600:1700:1900:8A70:D132:ACFF:E1CB:5031 (talk) 19:28, 6 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]