Talk:Needle telegraph/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The4lines (talk · contribs) 02:58, 9 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@SpinningSpark: I will start this review now. It is my first review so please if I miss something or forget something please tell me. Best, Signed,The4lines |||| ^{(You Asked?) (What I have Done.)} 02:58, 9 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Unlink Hans Christian Ørsted as you have linked before.
- It is conventional to repeat links that also appear in the lead. See MOS:DUPLINK. SpinningSpark 12:38, 9 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - I got them messed up...

Steinheil first installed his telegraph along five miles of track covering four stations around Munich When did he do it?

The source doesn't say, so we can't put a definite date in the article, but by implication, it was around 1837. It has to have occured in the short window between Steinheil being asked to look into railway telegraphs in 1836 and his installation on the Nūrnberg-Fūrth railway in 1838, so I think there is enough context there for the reader. SpinningSpark 12:38, 9 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Yeah I wanted to see if there was. It is fine.

Does not seem to me to have many porblems! Great refs and facts. Almost sure it is good to go after you fix the stuff I put. Best, Signed,The4lines |||| ^{(You Asked?) (What I have Done.)} 03:25, 9 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Spinningspark: Passing, again sorry for the mistakes, it was my first rewiew. Signed,The4lines |||| ^{(You Asked?) (What I have Done.)} 14:26, 9 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

That's no problem, better to have the issues looked at than not. SpinningSpark 15:23, 9 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]