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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:54, 4 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Could we link cross-over play to something like Crossover (fiction)?
- That is probably the closest concept to link to. Done.--Alexandra^IDV 02:32, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Larry MacDougall appears only in the infobox, not referenced anywhere.
- I had misspelled his name as McDougall in the article body. Good catch.--Alexandra^IDV 02:32, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Likewise Robert Dixon.
- Done.--Alexandra^IDV 02:32, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
While we may all know what a vampire is, it may be worth linking wraith as that's lesser known.
- Fair. Linking vampire too since they appear together in the article.--Alexandra^IDV 02:32, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Gen Con, I assume it was the one in Milwaukee? Our article calls it "Gen Con '94".
- Yes, that's correct. Swapped to "Gen Con '94".--Alexandra^IDV 02:32, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"going out of one's way to get a copy of" this is a bit whimsical for encyclopedia, is it a quote?
- Not a quote, but a slightly too close paraphrase. I have changed the wording to "particularly worth reading".--Alexandra^IDV 02:32, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Computer + Videogiochi" you put the other magazines into context, can you do the same for this.
- Done.--Alexandra^IDV 02:32, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"the Confederate" link.
- Done.--Alexandra^IDV 02:32, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
ISBNs should be all 10- or all 13-digit.
- I have followed Wikipedia:ISBN, which says However, if an older work only lists an ISBN-10, use that in citations instead of calculating an ISBN-13 for it. This is because ISBNs are often used as search strings and checksum differences between the two forms make it difficult to find items listed only under the other type.--Alexandra^IDV 02:32, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:33, 5 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Thank you for your comments - I believe I have fixed all the issues you mentioned, except for the ISBN question, which I commented on above.--Alexandra^IDV 02:36, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]