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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:00, 2 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Non-free use rationale looks good.
  • Add a serial comma after Paresh Rawal.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:22, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "between a police" → "between the police"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:22, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "100 location" → "100 locations"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:22, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "some of whom applauding" → "some of whom applauded"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:22, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Plot and cast

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  • Plot is 688 words so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
  • "Because of his action" → "Because of his actions"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "redirects the question talking" → "redirects the question by talking"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "how difficult his occupation" - reword.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "for a day and experience" → "for a day to experience"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Assited by Bansal" → "Assisted by Bansal"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Chauhan sends assassins after him although they only destroy his house" → "Chauhan sends assassins after him, who only destroy his house"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "it will makes" → "it will make"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "In the final attempt" → "In a final attempt"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "few men was planning" → "few men are planning"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "blaming the him" → "blaming him"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Shivaji takes up a gun, but pointing it to his arm, shoots himself, and then hands over the gun to Chauhan." - clarify. Does Shivaji shoot himself in the arm on purpose or by accident? Does he just simply hand the gun to Chauhan after doing so?
Done. Shivaji does it on purpose. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "with the state develops" → "with the state developing"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Production and soundtrack

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  • Remove the comma after "its subject".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "interview to Filmfare" → "interview with Filmfare"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "was originally to be" → "was originally going to be"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • didn't match mine ..." → didn't match mine".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Next actor suggested" → "The next actor suggested"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Shah Rukh Khan, however" → "Shah Rukh Khan. However"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "he initially reluctant" → "he was initially reluctant"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "physical trainings" → "physical training"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "part as Manjari" → "part of Manjari"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "portray the role in her own way and not copying Koirala had done" → "portray the role in her own way, not copying what Koirala had done"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The principal photography" → "Principal photography"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "states Maharashtra" → "states of Maharashtra"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "After the filming ended" → "After filming ended"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "who bought the rights" → "which bought the rights"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • was "a quite a letdown" → was "quite a letdown"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Release and reception

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  • "After scheduled for release" → "Originally scheduled for release"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the film was opened in 280 screens" → "the film opened on 280 screens"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Rename #Critical reception to #Reception.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Then make a subsection titled #Critical response.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Finally, make #Accolades a subsection as well.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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  • Sources are archived. Thumbs up icon
  • Mark references from The Hindu with "|url-access=subscription".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:49, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Is the link to Rotten Tomatoes necessary if it has 0 reviews?
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:49, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Sort categories in alphabetical order.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:49, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Progress

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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