Talk:Navy of the Independent State of Croatia/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 04:02, 11 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Section 1;
- It consisted of seven river stations – at Sisak; suggest an emdash instead of en dash
- Above suggestion follows for "two river gunboats – Ustaša and Bosut" and "two river minelayers – Zagreb and Zrinski"
Section 2;
- numbering only 1,262 in September 1943; what is this count? men, ships or material?
- MTB; mention in full on the first instant
- 8 September 1944, 31 December 1944, December 1944; the year may be dropped per MOS:DATEVAR
Section 3;
- Link the ranks Commander and Captain
Section 4; equivalent modern day ranks for Kontraadmiral and Kapetan Bojnogbroda
9.9% violation unlikely.
All images are licensed well, with appropriate information of designs.
External links are good and no dab links found.

Thanks for the review, Krishna. All done, I made them all spaced ndashes for consistency. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 06:08, 11 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 11:26, 13 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]