Talk:Nauru at the 2016 Summer Olympics/GA1
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Reviewer: No Great Shaker (talk · contribs) 09:27, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
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[edit]Hello, I'll review this. Will be in touch soon. No Great Shaker (talk) 09:27, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
Basic GA criteria
[edit]- Well written: the prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct. Mostly good now after some necessary corrections completed, but please see the questions below. Done.
- Complies with the MOS guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. No MOS problems now, though some copyediting has been necessary.
- All statements are verifiable with inline citations provided. Just one sentence needing citation: see below. Done.
- All inline citations are from reliable sources, etc. No problems.
- Contains a list of all references in accordance with the layout style guideline. The reflist is fine.
- No original research. No problems.
- No copyright violations or plagiarism. No problems.
- Broad in its coverage. Only a short article but the coverage is excellent and very informative. Completely within scope.
- Neutral. Fully meets NPOV by being objective throughout.
- Stable. No problems.
- Illustrated, if possible. Apart from the flag, none, and would not really expect any so this is not applicable.
- Images are at least fair use and do not breach copyright. As above.
Questions
[edit]This is looking quite good overall and it's encouraging to find coverage of a small nation like Nauru. I'm placing the review on hold for the moment because there are a couple of things that need to be addressed.
- I didn't understand the words "outside of direct qualifying position" (used twice) and, in the context, I think both instances needed to be rephrased as "outside of direct qualification". I'm wondering if a brief explanation of "direct qualification" might help the readers with an indication of Uera's position in the rankings.
- A citation or two is needed for the sentence about Marcus Stephen. While I know from his WP article that the statement is true, it still needs to be cited. Also, I changed the word "notorious" in this sentence to "notable" because I cannot see any reason for notoriety there. Would you please check the wording? If there is notoriety involved, a brief explanation would help.
Look forward to your reply. Thanks very much. No Great Shaker (talk) 10:47, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
- I reworded the first instance and removed the second instance. See [1]
- Added a citation. Thanks for the edit. See [2]
-- Dat GuyTalkContribs 13:36, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
Result of review
[edit]@DatGuy: Thanks for the citation and the judo edit. I'm more than happy to pass this now. Well done and all the best. No Great Shaker (talk) 13:43, 7 April 2019 (UTC)