Talk:Nature of a Sista'/GA2

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Reviewer: DAP388 (talk · contribs) 18:08, 4 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

This article is in good shape barring some typos and minor error in syntax in some places. Once these are addressed, then we’re good to go!

Lead

"It was Latifah's final album on the record label", "on" should be "with" in this instance.

Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 01:02, 5 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Background and recording

The opening sentence is a bit sloppy. The New York Times article said Latifah became a spokesperson for young black woman as well as the media, and that sentence does not match the source material. Perhaps something like "[...], Peter Watrous of The New York Times believed the rapper had become a representative for young black women and a media "hungry for someone articulate, political and savvy about feminism but not confrontational" would suffice.
"Watrous attributed the production and release of Nature of a Sista' as receiving a significant amount of hype and anticipation due to this reputation", phrasing is a bit clunky. Maybe "Because of her heightened profile, Nature of a Sista’ was considered among the most anticipated hip hop releases of the year" instead.

Revised this one and the above one as well. Thank you for the suggestions as I had difficulty with phrasing these two parts for some reason. Aoba47 (talk) 01:06, 5 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Composition and sound

"The rapper said that she decided to sing more on the songs was inspired by her interests and not financial gains", assuming this is a typo, yes?

Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 01:08, 5 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Release and promotion

"Latifah held an album release part in Nirvana", typo.

Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 01:08, 5 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Aoba47 That’s it. On hold for seven days. DAP 💅 18:08, 4 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the review. I will try to get to it in the next couple days. I am unfortunately experiencing some computer issues at the moment, and I will hopefully resolves them soon. Thank you again for your help! Aoba47 (talk) 19:20, 4 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@DAP388: Thank you for the review again! I believe that I have addressed everything. I hope you have a wonderful rest of your day or night. Aoba47 (talk) 01:08, 5 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good. Happy to pass it, cheers! DAP 💅 01:34, 5 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 01:55, 5 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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