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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:57, 6 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! Will review. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 09:57, 6 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • I would recommend keeping only one pronunciation in the lead so that it looks a bit less clumsy (see WP:MOSLEAD); the pronunciations can be stated in the infobox.
  •  Done
  • We do not keep citations in the lead unless we make significant claims. Not a strict rule, just felt I should mention it.
  • Cite number 1 (visitor numbers) has no other place in the text or infobox which it can be placed, cite number 2 now moved further down
  • (Skupščina Republike Slovenije, It was opened Something wrong with the bracket?
  •  Done
  • People's Assembly Building of the Republic of Slovenia and Palace of the People's Assembly need not be in bold.
  • I think they do, as previous names for the place.
  • You should add the Parliament (Parlament) as an a.k.a. name in the first line.
  •  Done

Construction

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  • of 394 feet (120 m) What is this? The height? The base diameter?
  •  Done clarified height
  • A new legislature building was thereafter...bronze figures framing its main portico. Source?
  •  Done
  • Twenty-seven master craftsmen As per WP:MOSNUM you should say "27", it would also appear less wordy.
  •  Done
  • It was completed in 1959. Source?
  •  Done
  • At the 1991 independence of Slovenia Better say "After the independence of Slovenia in 1991".
  •  Done changed to "following"

Design

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  • the main façade faces Republic Square and is inlaid with Karst marble, with green Oplotnica granite below each window. Does ref. 6 support this as well?
  • That's supported by refs 6/3/7
  • wall painting by the 20th century mural artist Slavko Pengov, extends across the length of the entrance hall and illustrates the history of Slovenians Does ref. 4 support this as well?
  • It can, but ref 8 is there to do that
  • the mural portrays events including You give the years for some events and not for others. Would be good to have consistency.
  • The events which took place within a year have theirs. The world wars don't need to have years on and the last two items are connected to WWII.
  • Following the 1991 independence of Slovenia No need to mention the year again, we know this already.
  • What's the harm?
  • Link or explain amphitheater
  •  Done
  • Duplicate links: independence of Slovenia, Slovenian Parliament
  •  Done

Incidents

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  • Link granite, euro.
  •  Done

That should be it. These done, I would be glad to promote this. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 06:34, 7 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Changes made as ticked above. Rcsprinter123 (interface) 19:36, 7 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the quick replies. I believe the article is ready for promotion now. Great job! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 06:39, 8 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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