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split the sentence with the WTA and ITF titles into two separate sentences
Hibino has won two singles and two doubles titles on the WTA Tour. Along with that, she has won eight singles and eight doubles on the International Tennis Federation Women's Circuit (ITF). JamesAndersoon (talk) 10:49, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The lead should be longer, and have a second paragraph. Some things you might want to add are
The citations to [1] are a bit too close to copying or plagiarism.
At the age of 10, her mother introduced her and her older brother to tennis to shift their attention from playing video games to sports. ===>>> At the age of 10, her mother introduced her and her older brother to tennis to get her brother to switch his focus from video games to sports. (Lessen copying; and the source only mentions it was only her brother who played video games)
Travelling has given Hibino the chance to eat local foods and visit famous places. ====>>> Hibino enjoys eating local foods and sightseeing at famous places while travelling on tour. (Lessen copying)
Her singles performances then started to weaken, falling in the early rounds ===>>> Her singles performance then started to decline, as she lost in the early rounds
such as French Open, Wimbledon, Canadian Open, US Open, Osaka Mayor's Cup, or Dunlop Japan Open ===>>> such as the French Open, Wimbledon, the Canadian Open, the US Open, the Osaka Mayor's Cup, and the Japan Open
Having made it to the top-100 and relatively few WTA main draws in previous years, Hibino mostly played tour-level events in 2016. ===>>> Having made it to relatively few WTA main draws in previous years, Hibino mostly played tour-level events in 2016 as a result of being in the top 100.
the first week following the Australian Open <<<=== isn't it the week before the Australian Open?
She made her highest singles ranking the following week, when Australian Open started. How about: Right after that, she reached her highest-singles ranking in the first week of the following Australian Open. JamesAndersoon (talk) 16:35, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
improvement with ranking ===>>> improvement in ranking
There she faced former world No. 1, Maria Sharapova, in the first round and failed to reach the following one. ===>>> In her debut, she lost to former world No. 1 Maria Sharapova in the first round.
At the US Open, she made her debut to complete at least the first round at all four Grand Slams ===>>> With her debut at the US Open, she played the main draw at all four Grand Slam tournaments, but again lost in the first round.
being knocked out in either the first round of qualifications at the Australian Open or WTA 1000 Dubai. Indian Wells and Miami Open ===>>> after being knocked out in the first round at the Australian Open, she lost in qualifying at several WTA 1000 tournaments, including the Dubai Tennis Championships, the Indian Wells Open, and the Miami Open.
Her crashing out in qualifications continued at the WTA 1000 Madrid and Rome ===>>> Her losing in qualifying at WTA 1000 tournaments continued in Madrid and Rome.
but her first final came in July at the $60K Honolulu in the singles event[9] and later first doubles title of the year at the $100K Suzhou in October ===>>> . Her first final came in July at the $60K Honolulu singles event. She later won first doubles title of the year at the $100K Suzhou event in October.
she did not get further than the first round, or qualifications of Australian Open, French Open or US Open ===>>> she lost in the first round at the Australian Open did not get past qualifying at the French Open or US Open.
letting her win only three games. Hibino was set to play against Richèl Hogenkamp but since it was obvious that Japan won, the match was canceled. ===>>> letting her win only three games to help Japan win the tie. (You don't need to mention the dead rubber.)
(2) The 2021 section, probably separating it from 2018–20
Common mistakes (all pointed out above)
"was advanced" should just be "advanced"
If you refer to an ITF event as "$00K City Name", it should be followed by "tournament" (as in "$00K City Name tournament")
I don't think "qualification" or "qualifications" are correct terms. I more commonly see "qualifying draw" or just "qualifying" (for example, "Hibino lost in the qualifying draw at the Antarctic Open" or "Hibino lost in qualifying at the Antarctic Open".)
Overall, the structure looks pretty good. Mainly just the minor grammatical issues (and expanding two sections). Let me know if you have any questions. Placing on hold. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 02:04, 19 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Sportsfan77777, JamesAndersoon, where does this nomination stand? I see that the review was completed and put on hold over four weeks ago. I posted a ping on JamesAndersoon's page back on October 9, but there has been no attempt by them to return to this review or the article and address the issues raised above, despite them having made over 250 edits on Wikipedia in the past week. Sportsfan77777, you might wish to set a deadline on addressing the issues you've raised—normal time on hold is seven days, which is long past. BlueMoonset (talk) 18:04, 18 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I'll see if I can get their attention. They had to wait a pretty long while to get this article reviewed, so I wouldn't be surprised if it takes longer than usual to respond to the review. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 22:24, 20 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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