Talk:Nanda Khat

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This needs a mayor re-write.

There's so many errors, typos and hiccups in here that I can't even start to list them all. The one editor who did most of the work on this page clearly needs to get his language and spelling updated, on top of doing a lot of research. Since when was Hugh Ruttledge rechristened "Huge"? He was in the vicinity of the peak in 1932, not 1931. The first claim to have summited Nanda Khat was made in 1961 but all relevant sources have this one tagged as "disputed". The page looks more like a promotional article to the 2010 expedition that is listed. Parts have been copied verbatim off http://www.himalayanclub.org/journal/ascent-of-nanda-khat-1961/ without listing it as a source. Time is short so right now I'm not looking into it, sorry, but I've got a load of other stuff to attend to. Qwrk (talk) 15:06, 20 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]