Talk:Namárië/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 02:26, 26 January 2023 (UTC)

• Hello once again! :) Hoping to get to this within a few hours. 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 02:26, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
• On hold, pls ping me—go get 'em! 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 04:28, 26 January 2023 (UTC)

• LunaEatsTuna Many thanks! I think that's all done now. Chiswick Chap (talk) 12:00, 26 January 2023 (UTC)

• Nice work! I am satisfied with these changes and can now confidently pass this article for GA status. As always, congrats on another fantastic Middle-earth article! 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 16:50, 26 January 2023 (UTC)

Copyvio check

No concerns from me. Quotations are used in-line with WP:COPYQUOTE.

• Noted.

Files

All images are relevant, high quality and copyright-free:

File:Namarie First Stanza Tengwar.jpg: valid public domain rationale;

File:Valinor.svg: CC-BY-SA 4.0;

File:Namarie Gregorian.jpg: valid fair use rationale;

File:The Tolkien Ensemble (cropped).jpg: CC-BY-SA 4.0.

• Noted.

Prose

• The caption of the first image should end with a full stop for consistency with the other captions.

• Full stops at the end of captions only for complete sentences...

• I did not initially realise that caption four was a complete sentence.

• Could you mention in the lead that Quenya was constructed by Tolkien?

• Done.

• "songs from Middle-earth" – wikilink Middle-earth.

• Added.

• "From 1997 to 2005 the" – needs a comma.

• Done.

• Wikilink mezzosoprano.

• Done.

• "who played Saruman in the movies" – recommend "who plays Saruman in the movies".

• Past tense for deceased actor.

• Oh, I see!

• "his Music of The Lord of the Rings film series," – uncapitalise.

• Done.

• Is there a secondary source for the Narsilion album? Otherwise it may not be entirely noteworthy.

• Added.

• Nice!

Refs

All sources are RS. Passes spotcheck—no concerns with refs 1, 4, 5, 9, 15 or 18.

• Noted.

• Is there a parameter available for ref 4 that does not italicise University of North Texas?

• Done.

• Ref 19 needs a page number.

• Don't have the book to hand, but there's another source, so dropping the ref for now.

• Noted.

Other

Short description, efn note, navs, other templates and cats good.

• Noted.

• Recommend adding WP:ALT text to images where possible.

• Done.

• The word-by-word analysis external link is redundant as it is cited in the lead.

• Removed.

• The external links for the song rendition by Aijin Hidelias should be removed as promotional material. If it cannot be mentioned in the article itself I doubt this needs an external link either.

• Removed.

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.