Talk:Nagi Yanagi/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zzzoom (talk · contribs) 14:41, 6 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It be helpful if some of the tables in Discography were sortable. Also, there are some tables with useless rows in that section.

Not sure how to do that, maybe @AngusWOOF: can help here. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 02:41, 8 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
The discography table doesn't need to be sortable but I would recommend title be listed in the first column as with Koda Kumi discography. AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 11:07, 8 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

This whole section looks like it could work as a list.

That's how artist biographies are usually written though, right? A summary of their releases? Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 02:41, 8 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I suppose so, after looking back. Zoom (talk page) 02:47, 8 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
Not sure that this is a source relating to the topic.

I've replaced it with an archive link; it seems the site got squatted since the time of publication. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 02:41, 8 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

It would be helpful in the future to archive all of your references. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zzzoom (talk • contribs) 22:31, 7 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Is this a requirement or just a recommendation? Just for clarification. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 02:41, 8 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Just a recommendation! My bad. Zoom (talk page) 02:47, 8 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

As I've mentioned to you on Discord, no free images of Yanagi are known to exist, so not much I can do on that end. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 02:41, 8 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Overall:
@Narutolovehinata5:@Juhachi:Just make sure to follow through with the previously mentioned recommendations. Otherwise, good job!
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