Talk:Nadjamuddin Daeng Malewa

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Did you know... that when Nadjamuddin Daeng Malewa was forming a government cabinet for the State of East Indonesia, he was outside the region?

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 07:00, 3 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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... that when Nadjamuddin Daeng Malewa was forming a government cabinet for the State of East Indonesia, he was outside the region? Source: [1]

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/William A. Massingill
Comment: Note: technically the source doesn't say that he was outside SoEI explicitly, but Jakarta is pretty obviously not within the SoEI. Kinda like saying "he was not in the USA" when the source says "he was in Beijing".

Moved to mainspace by Juxlos (talk). Self-nominated at 12:09, 12 November 2021 (UTC).[reply]

Meets newness and length requirements. Despite relying largely on Agung 1996 I could not detect any close paraphrasing of the book (at least from spotchecking the pages Google Books allowed me to read). QPQ fulfilled. Well-cited and well-written with a neutral voice. Hook fact is directly in the article. I would recommend tweaking ALT0 a little bit, as "it" poses some ambiguity (did he form his cabinet without himself inside it, or did he form the cabinet outside SoEI?). Maybe by replacing "it" with "the region" or "the province" but it's your call @Juxlos:. DigitalIceAge (talk) 22:47, 1 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@DigitalIceAge: Fair point - edited. Juxlos (talk) 00:10, 2 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, should be good to go. DigitalIceAge (talk) 00:55, 2 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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