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Reviewer: Yash! (talk · contribs) 10:39, 25 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I will do this. Thanks, Yash! 10:39, 25 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • "possibly already" -> "possibly".
  • Link "Arnstadt".

History and text

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  • Please mention who Jonathan Green was.
  • Also, W. G. Whittaker. We can probably link him as well.
  • Unlink "Mühlhausen" the second time.
  • References for the first two bullets?
  • Why is "DOKTOR CONRAD MECKBACH" in all caps? Wouldn't that inside "" without the capitalisation be better?
  • "which occurred in April 1707" -> "in April 1707".
  • Use the full name of Meckbach if possible.
  • Source for the last sentence?

Music

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  • Can we have individual sub-sections?
  • "There are no recitatives, no da capo repeats, and there is no chorale tune." - why is it important to state that? If Bach uses them in his later or earlier or other works or if it is relevant in any manner, do mention that or else remove that statement.
  • "The musicologist" -> "Musicologist".
  • Are we missing the third movement?

References

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  • Ref#9 - Link "University of Alberta".
  • Ref#11 - jsbachcantatas.com should not be in italics.
  • Ref#12 - juliankuerti.com same as above.
  • Ref#13 - bachkantaten.ch same as above.

That should do it. My sincere apologies for the delay. I was caught up with the moving in the Netherlands. Yash! 17:28, 15 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Mostly done. We still need a source for the second bullet in the History section. DOKTOR CONRAD MECKBACH is in all caps because it is an initialism and so appropriately capitalized per MOS:CAPSACRS (and this is Meckbach's full name). The movement descriptions are too short to warrant their own subsections, and none are missing. "The musicologist" is correct. Website names are appropriately italicized - see the documentation for |website= in {{cite web}}. Nikkimaria (talk) 19:58, 15 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for the changes! Perhaps Francis Schonken could help with the Zwang? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:33, 15 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
That looks good. I will pass once a source has been added for the second bullet. Cheers, Yash! 14:00, 17 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I tried: copied the Zwang ref from BWV 4, where Francis introduced it. I am sorry not to read French, - could someone else please confirm it? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:50, 17 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I will pass assuming good faith. Great work! Yash! 14:30, 18 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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