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Reviewer: Anotherclown (talk · contribs) 11:09, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Progression

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  • Version of the article when originally reviewed: [1]
  • Version of the article when review was closed: [2]

Technical review

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  • Citations: The Citation Check tool reveals no errors (no action required).
  • Disambiguations: no dab links [3] (no action required).
  • Linkrot: External links all check out [4] (no action required).
  • Alt text: images all have alt text [5] (no action required).
  • Copyright violations: The Earwig Tool is currently not working, however spot checks using Google searches reveal no issues (no action required).

Criteria

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  • It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
    • "the Admiralty initially planned to built..." → "the Admiralty initially planned to build..."
    • "and armed with eight or nine, in four twin or three triple..." eight or nine what?
    • "The only limitations of the design were the ability...", ability or inability?
    • "and main armoured deck was 8 inches..." perhaps "while the main armoured deck was 8 inches..." Anotherclown (talk) 07:46, 11 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
      • Good catches all.
  • It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
    • All major points cited using WP:RS
    • No issues with WP:OR as far as I can see.
    • Minor issues with citation format:
      • Note 14: "Part 1, pp. 6–7" should this be "Campbell, Part 1, pp. 6–7"?
      • Notes 17, 19, 20 and 21: Inconsistent presentation of the "Navweaps.com" refs: is some places you write "Navweaps.com" and in others "navweaps.com". Anotherclown (talk) 07:46, 11 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
        • Fixed.
  • It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
    a (tagged and captioned): b (Is illustrated with appropriate images): c (non-free images have fair use rationales): d public domain pictures appropriately demonstrate why they are public domain: