Talk:Mythmaker/GA2

GA Review

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Well-written

Infobox section
- When specifically did was the album recorded in 2005 and 2006?
Background section
- What personal events and personal difficulties did Ogre have in the first paragraph? Specify if possible.
- In the next to last sentence of the second paragraph, who is "He"? Key or Walk?
Charts section
- For all rankings in the respective Billboard charts, list when they reach their respective peaks in each of those charts?
Critical reception section
- For Yücel's review in the third paragraph, change "He" To Yücel at the start of the third and fifth sentences.
Artwork section.
- For this album, did Gilmore do anything on this album in regards to the sleeve design and layout? The comments in parentheses does not make this clear.
Tour section
- Create article for Justin Bennett.

Factually accurate and verifiable.

Reference #6: Add Regen Mag and italicize on sourcing.
Reference #7: Add Metal Storm Plus and italicize on sourcing.
Reference #8: Italicize Sputnik Music.
Reference #9: Add RockNWorld and italicize.
All references listed are verifiable.

Broad

Covers album's history and impact.
More detail required in numerous sections, mainly on History, Featured Songs, and Tour.

Neutral

No issues.

Stable

Last edit done on 25 April 2010. No issues.

Image

One image and is valid. No issues.

Overall

Hold. Needs work, but it can be done.

Reviewer: Chris (talk) 17:04, 8 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Revisions

I believe I've dealt with all the issues you detailed above. I made all the little changes, added details, and fixed references as requested. In order to eliminate the stubby sections, I re-organized and combined some, while adding a few details here and there. If that's still not enough, let me know, and I'll try to flesh things out more. Or if you have a suggestion for how to organize the sections that would be great too. The only issue I couldn't fix at all, so far, is the dates that the album was recorded. That was already in the infobox before I began editing this article, and I haven't been able to find a source online for it yet. I can continue looking, however. Thanks for the review! Torchiest (talk | contribs) 20:06, 9 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good. Gets the GA. Chris (talk) 20:52, 9 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]