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Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 12:55, 3 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I thought your suggestions a bit over specialised but I have added a couple more. There are not many on Commons. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:08, 3 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • The lead doesn't appear to summarise the entire article, for example on description and "culture".
Expanded a bit. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:08, 3 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • "are often used as a diagnostic feature of the group." Context could clarify this for the average reader. Diagnosis for classification?
Changed wording. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:08, 3 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
I have moved the sections around a bit. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:08, 3 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Changed wording. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:08, 3 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • "benthic and pelagic" Explain in parenthesis?
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:08, 3 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • There are some other uncommon terms throughout that could benefit from this too, such as "ghonochoristic".
Removed that word and explained some others. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:08, 3 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • with the adults preying on their young" Their own offspring?
I doubt they distinguish between their own offspring and that of others. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:08, 3 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
I have replaced one of the other images (which was of the same species) with that one. As for the name, we have Isopoda but Copepod and I am not bothered much either way and usually accept what I find. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:35, 6 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Alright, I'll pass! FunkMonk (talk) 09:00, 6 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]