Talk:My Name Is My Name/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 05:44, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Prose

Lead

• The infobox should state the album was released October 7 as the standard is to just list earliest release date.

• Done. STATic message me! 21:07, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

•  Done

Background

• "which is executive produced by Kanye West"..... this sounds awkward, try something like "which Kanye West produced".
• "In July 2012, the Virginia native" and "the Virginia rapper" would read better as just "Pusha T" or "the rapper".
• "Hip Hop Since 1987" should be italicized, linked with a URL, or have quotation marks. Otherwise it looks like he was speaking on the matter since 1987.
• The "pain" in "Actually, there is a line in "Pain" where I say 'My name is my name', that line comes" should have ' rather than ".

• Not sure what you meant exactly, did I do it? STATic message me! 21:07, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

• Better, though the part on Kanye producing it still sounds awkward. Try "his solo debut album, which was produced by Kanye West, and at the time included"..... XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 21:57, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

• Look good? STATic message me! 23:26, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

•  Done

Release and promotion

• Per MOS:PUNCT and MOS:QUOTEMARKS, there are some uses of curly quotation marks/apostrophes in the third paragraph after the quote which should be replaced with straight apostrophes. i.e. ’ → '

• Done. STATic message me! 21:07, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

•  Done

Critical response

• Again, curly apostrophes/quotation marks that should be replaced with straight ones. All three paragraphs of the section.

•  Done

Accolades

• Once more, curly punctuation should be replaced with straight punctuation. Both paragraphs of the section.

•  Done

Track listing

• Names of people involved only need to be stated in full once.

• Done for all producers where their real name is also their stage name. STATic message me! 21:14, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

•  Done

Sourcing

• No problems here

Coverage

• The "Commercial performance" section should be expanded. I would recommend a total of at least three paragraphs.

• @XXSNUGGUMSXX: Due to there not being much commercial success of the album, there is not really much to comment or report. It only received in-depth coverage on the US sales, which are covered as much as they can and all international chart positions are already stated. STATic message me! 21:14, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

• At the very least, it shouldn't have two incomplete paragraphs. If there isn't any more significant information for now, it's probably best to combine them to one paragraph. XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 21:57, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

• Alright done. STATic message me! 23:26, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

•  Done

Neutrality

• No problems here

Stability

• No problems here

GA Pass

Good work fixing this up! I'm passing. XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 23:31, 11 March 2014 (UTC)