Talk:My Boy Only Breaks His Favorite Toys/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Medxvo (talk) 07:03, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 08:15, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Medxvo (talk · contribs) 15:54, 28 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"outside the regular set list at the second" - shouldn't there be a comma between "set list" and "at the second"?
Billboard and The Hollywood Reporter can be linked in the critical reception section
Why isn't the commercial performance section sourced?
"The track also occupied the top 25 positions" - any way to paraphrase this (?)
Ref 17; "Associated Press"?
Would be cool if we mention/reference the track length in prose

It's refreshing to see that my favorite song from the album has this well-written article, even though I'm kinda still mad that the lyric "He was my best friend and that was the worst part" was left out from the studio version :) Anyways, @Ippantekina: I'll put this On hold for now. Medxvo (talk) 15:54, 28 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review! I've addressed everything accordingly :) This song sounds much sadder on piano fr... "He was my best friend and that was the worst part"? Jaw-dropping! Ippantekina (talk) 03:59, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the quick response, will ✓ Pass it now :) Congratulations! Medxvo (talk) 07:03, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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