Talk:My Boy (Billie Eilish song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 20:52, 26 July 2020 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Because of your work on "Hotter than Hell", I will be taking this on. I'll try to get to it soon. LOVI33 20:52, 26 July 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• "a song recorded by American" → "a song by American"
• "debut studio EP" → "debut extended play (EP)"
• The SWMRS cover doesn't seem notable for the lead, remove it
• "It has been certified by several" → ""My Boy" has been awarded several"
• "most notably" → "including a"

Background and composition

• Target single to Single (music)
• Target EP to extended play
• "According to sheet music published at Musicnotes.com" → "According to sheet music published by Universal Music Publishing Group at Musicnotes.com", with target
• "F_#3 to B₄" ← "F♯₃ to B₄", using Template:music

Reception

• Remove "Upon its release,"
• "and felt its chorus" → "and felt it's chorus"
• Remove "most notably"

Live performances and other usages

• Change title to "Promotion and other usages"

Track listing

• Looks good!

Credits and personnel

• Change title to 'Personnel', 'Credits and personnel' is usually used if recording locations are also involved
• target liner notes to itself

Charts

• MOS:TABLECAPTION probably: Chart position for "My Boy"
• Which year did it peak in? Change to Chart (Year peaked)

Certifications

• MOS:TABLECAPTION probably: Certifications and sales for "My Boy"
• Fix bottom so sales+streaming figures are shown

Release history

• MOS:TABLECAPTION probably: Release dates and formats for "My Boy"
• "Country" → "Region"
• "Format" → "Format(s)"

References

• Make sure all these are archived using the tool
• copyvio score looks good at 18.0%
• A better source is needed for ref 1, a source to an EP that is unarchived doesn't confirm it's release
• Target Don't Smile at Me to itself in ref 2
• Target Billboard to Billboard (magazine) in ref 7

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold for now. Once issues are fixed I will pass it. LOVI33 18:38, 27 July 2020 (UTC)

LOVI33 I have addressed all the issues. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 19:45, 27 July 2020 (UTC)

Great!, thats a ✓ Pass. LOVI33 01:57, 28 July 2020 (UTC)