Talk:Music – Songs from and Inspired by the Motion Picture/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:25, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:25, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

• Improve the image's non-free use rationale with this template.  Done
• Infobox looks good, but it would be better if the image also had alt text.  Done
• I would expand the lead a bit to better summarize the entire article.  Done
• Is the "Songs" header necessary if the other "section" is 1 sentence?  Done
• "which opens" → "that opens"  Done
• "which features" → "that features" (both uses)  Done
• an "massive" → a "massive"  Done
• Archive sources (either manually or with this tool).  Done
• The reference after "14 tracks" should not be in all caps per WP:ALLCAPS and WP:SHOUT.  Done
• References should not be using the "at the Wayback Machine" template. Fix the reference using it.  Done
• Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".  Done
• Mark references from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited". Done
• UPROXX → Uproxx (WP:SHOUT)  Done
• REVOLT → Revolt (WP:SHOUT)  Done

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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I will begin making the changes and continuing to do so as the review goes on. Thank you, Some Dude From North Carolina - Peterpie123rww (talk) 20:54, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina: I have made the changes listed – have tried to expand the lead section, do let me know if it should be done more. Thanks! - Peterpie123rww (talk) 21:30, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

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