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Moon statement

The statement about the bulb being seen from the moon needs to be referenced even more quickly than the rest. The first question is how would you know. I am guessing that simply based on that it will at least need to be rephrased.--Jorfer (talk) 23:11, 10 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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what about the body works exhibit? I need to know information. I need to know if I can get discount tickets for my group —Preceding unsigned comment added by 97.97.41.25 (talk) 06:53, 31 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Info like that isn't appropriate for wikipedia; see "What Wikipedia is not". MOSI's website will tell you what you need to know: www.mosi.org

Zeng8r (talk) 12:38, 31 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Improvements needed

The article still reads like an advertisement. Some of the text looks like it was cut-and-pasted directly from promotional literature, a likely WP:COPYVIO. The article needs to be rewritten to a WP:NPOV. Also, more footnotes are needed, especially since there is only a single third-party reference. Reify-tech (talk) 14:39, 18 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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