Talk:Muppet*Vision 3D/GA1
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:11, 3 June 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
[edit]- The image of the ride in the infobox needs an alt image description; please add one
Lead
[edit]Paragraph 1
[edit]- "The show, however, completely unravels when Dr. Bunsen Honeydew's experimental 3D sprite, Waldo, causes mayhem during the next portion of the show." --> "The show, however, completely unravels when Dr. Bunsen Honeydew's experimental 3D sprite, Waldo, causes mayhem during an accompanying portion of the show."
Paragraph 3
[edit]- Things that are mentioned in the lead, such as a great bulk of the third paragraph, need to be included in the article as well
Queue
[edit]- No grammatical errors, but...
- There are absolutely zero sources in this section?
Cast
[edit]- No sources?
Performers
[edit]- Again, no sources
- "Additional performers include; ..." --> "Additional performers include: ..."
References
[edit]- Reference #11 needs (Month Day, Year) dates instead of (Day Month Year) dates
End of GA Review:
[edit]Although this article is at a good length, there are zero sources in the "Queue" section, a section where I believe you need some. Also, the lead's third paragraph discusses several things that are not even mentioned in the article. I will place this on hold for seven days to allow for some additional citation and references. Thank you. Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 20:59, 13 June 2016 (UTC).
- @Carbrera: give me a few days to work on this, as I have a test tomorrow. --Elisfkc (talk) 18:01, 14 June 2016 (UTC)
- Failed due to inactivity for over a week. Please renominate this again in the future and I'll gladly review it. Thank you. Carbrera (talk) 21:31, 20 June 2016 (UTC)