Talk:Multilateral Investment Guarantee Agency/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tomcat7 (talk · contribs) 13:27, 4 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

There are a few deep-breathing multi-clause sentences that could be split. For example "The Multilateral Investment Guarantee Agency (MIGA) is an international financial institution which offers political risk insurance guarantees to help investors protect foreign direct investments made in developing countries against political risk.[1]" and "It was established in 1988 to serve as an investment insurance facility of the World Bank to help investors overcome political and other non-commercial risks and invest confidently in developing countries.[2]" - please split them
The language is tough but I think it is standard for economic articles.--Tomcat (7) 13:36, 7 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I have rephrased and split the sentences you pointed out, and also shortened and rephrased some others throughout the article. John Shandy` • talk 14:50, 7 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]