Talk:Muhanna ibn Isa/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:05, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:05, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

No copyvio or dablinks detected. External links work well. Fairly well-written and concise, only a few comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:27, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• He was described by historian Amalia Levanoni as "the eldest and most senior amir" of the Al Fadl during his era Appears only in the lead. It should also occur in the main article. The citation may be kept in the lead as this looks like a controversial claim.

Ancestry

• Two of 'Isa's sons, Muhanna II...Al Fadl branches, respectively. Source?

Sources

• What source is note 1 based on?
• Can a few translated titles be added?

• Thanks for taking all of these reviews Sainsf. I addressed everything above except those under the "Sources" section b/c I'm pretty much illiterate in Arabic. @Attar-Aram syria: could you help with this? --Al Ameer (talk) 21:15, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

• Thanks. Transtitles are just a suggestion, but the source for the note is necessary. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:45, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Al Ameer son The only concern before I can promote this is the source for the note. Translation is not mandatory. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 05:02, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

I added the source for the note.--Attar-Aram syria (talk) 06:59, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks. I can promote this now. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:27, 27 June 2016 (UTC)