Talk:Muhammad III of Granada/GA1
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Reviewer: Gog the Mild (talk · contribs) 20:42, 1 September 2019 (UTC)
On my list. Give me a couple of days. Gog the Mild (talk) 20:42, 1 September 2019 (UTC)
I have done some copy editing. As usual, don't hesitate to flag up anything you are not happy with.
- Thanks, it looks great! HaEr48 (talk) 12:32, 4 September 2019 (UTC)
- Optional: Consider alt text for the images.
- Done. HaEr48 (talk) 12:32, 4 September 2019 (UTC)
- "They belonged to the Nasrid clan—also known as Banu Nasr or Banu al-Ahmar—which according to later Granadan historian and vizier Ibn al-Khatib, was descended from Sa'd ibn Ubadah, a prominent companion of the Islamic prophet Muhammad, from the Banu Khazraj tribe in Arabia; Sa'd's descendants migrated to Spain and settled in Arjona as farmers." This sentence is a little long and
- Split into two. HaEr48 (talk) 12:32, 4 September 2019 (UTC)
- Kennedy should have a publisher location.
- Done. HaEr48 (talk) 12:32, 4 September 2019 (UTC)
It seems to be in very good shape. Let me leave it for a day or two, and then give it another read through. Gog the Mild (talk) 11:51, 4 September 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks Gog the Mild for taking a look! HaEr48 (talk) 12:33, 4 September 2019 (UTC)
- Nice article. A pleasure to assess. Promoting. Gog the Mild (talk) 17:21, 5 September 2019 (UTC)
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