Talk:Mrs. California
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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 18:27, 6 January 2012 (UTC)
Will review this one soon. Ruby 2010/2013 18:27, 6 January 2012 (UTC)
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Comments
[edit]- You use "episode" too much in the first lead paragraph; change it up
- ""Mrs. California" received a range of reviews from critics from positive to mixed responses and was ranked the fifth best episode of the season, so far. " Seems like sloppy writing (from...from), and you should indicate who ranked it the 5th best episode
- Wikilink bench-press
- ""Mrs California" features a guest appearance from Maura Tierney who is set to play Robert California's wife, Susan California.[4]" "Is set" is past tense; she already guest starred
- I prefer to split the production section into 3 paragraphs for ease of reading (writing, guest stars, and web clips)
- Reviews: ""Mrs. California" received a range of reviews from critics from positive to mixed responses." Sloppy writing again
- "Despite this he complimented the cold open" Why "despite this"? (Note I haven't seen the episode). You could actually delete this sentence, as you already mention multiple reviewers liked the cold open
- IMDb is not a reliable source
- Ref 16: Unitalicise TV by the Numbers, Hollywood.com,
- Italicise New York and TV Guide
- It's The Hollywood Reporter
- Any cultural refs?
Address above comments and respond here when you have finished. Thanks, Ruby 2010/2013 22:21, 6 January 2012 (UTC)
- OK, I believe I've fixed all the issues. In addition, I added a completely new section about Cultural References. You might check that out!--Gen. Quon (talk) 01:32, 7 January 2012 (UTC)
- To maintain consistency with other Office episodes, you can just have one solid production section (Above, I only meant make three separate paragraphs, not sub-sections). Otherwise the article looks good. Pass for GA. Nice work, Ruby 2010/2013 03:21, 7 January 2012 (UTC)
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