Moviestar (Harpo song) was a Music good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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The pop genre is not sourced in the body and only Schlager influences are mentioned
Mention in the first sentence that it was "for his seventh studio album of the same name (1976)"
The second sentence of the first para should be the backing vocals one instead
The lead is quite poorly ordered; for starters, the rejection sentence should be the fourth sentence of the first para, then the recording one and release afterwards
""Moviestar" tells the story of an individual who believes to be an A-list actor" → "It tells the story of an individual who dreams of being an actor"
"It makes multiple references to" → "Multiple references are made to" but the pop culture part is not directly sourced anywhere in the body
"producer Bengt Palmers rejected it as he felt he could not properly produce the record." → "Bengt Palmers rejected it as he felt he could not properly undertake production."
Sveriges Television should not be italicised
Remove the previous connections part since this is only notable for the body, not the lead
Remove overly obvious wikilink on United Kingdom
Critical reception should come before commercial performance
"became a hit on" → "became a hit in"
Remove wikilink on Continental Europe
Remove wikilink on Netherlands
"during August of that year. It made it's way across" → "during August 1975. The song moved across"
Remove wikilink on Scandinavia
"The single was well-received" → ""Moviestar" was well-received"
"weeks while it was at number-one for four weeks" → "weeks, while spending four weeks at number-one"
Shouldn't number-one have a dash always for consistency?
"a hit in Oceania, reaching the top-ten" → "a hit in Oceania, reaching the top-10" per MOS:NUM
Remove wikilink on Australia
Remove wikilink on New Zealand
[17] should only be invoked once in the sentence
Remove wikilink on Scandinavia
"while also reaching" → "while also peaking at" but this position is not sourced, also why is an additional citation used for position 3 in Denmark here?
Remove wikilink on Finland
Italicise Svensktoppen
Add a full-stop at the end of the above sentence rather than a semi-colon
"was blocked by DJM who" → "was blocked by DJM, who"
""Movie Star" becoming a chart hit in the UK; it reached" → ""Movie Star" becoming a chart hit in the UK, reaching" to start the sentence, unless a source can be added to back up them relenting
The capitalization through the release is not sourced
"reached number two," → "reached number two on two respective weeks," or something similar, but the positions are not sourced by the URLs; maybe add archives?
✗ Fail time, as it has been a month now and no response whatsoever even after I posted on the user's talk page. --K. Peake09:27, 21 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]