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Nominator: Volcanoguy (talk · contribs)
Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 13:25, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Comments to follow soon. ♦ JAGUAR 13:25, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
- @Jaguar and Volcanoguy: what's going on?? this sat here for the whole of april. 750h+ 09:25, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
- I'm very sorry for the delay - life has been very hectic lately. Will finish this now. ♦ JAGUAR 15:53, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
- Lead
- "is a stratovolcano in Cassiar Land District of northwestern British Columbia" - is this not missing a definite article ('the')?
- "The third and fourth stages 0.9 million years ago" - 900,000 years ago?
- ""Thick trachyte flows were issued during the fifth stage 0.3 million years ago" - likewise, 300,000 years ago
- Body
- "A period of volcanic activity 0.3 million years ago deposited the Kakiddi Formation which also truncates the Ice Peak Formation." - same here, in the Stratigraphy subsection. Is there a technical reason why these are preferred?
- "Most of the Buckley Lake to Mowdade Lake Route is marked by a series of rock cairns from Tsekone Ridge onwards" - cairns has already been linked in the article
I've read through the entire article and am impressed by the usual standards. As a result I can find nothing holding this back, so will pass this outright. Apologies again for the delay. ♦ JAGUAR 16:13, 15 May 2024 (UTC)