Talk:Morgan Frost/GA1

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 15:04, 6 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this later. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 15:04, 6 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Review

Are acronyms (OHL, AHL) needed in the lead if they are never used again? They are explained in the body anyways.

Removed — Ghost River 17:57, 6 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Fix the dash on 2018-19 OHL season WL so it bypasses the redirect

Fixed — Ghost River 17:57, 6 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Fix WL on hat trick to bypass redirect

Fixed — Ghost River 17:57, 6 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Recommend changing All-Star in Awards and honours to All-Star Game or All-Star Classic

Added — Ghost River 17:57, 6 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

HickoryOughtShirt?4 I have also changed the lede to reflect that (for the time being, at least) he's a prospect in the Phantoms and not a full-fledged Flyer. Really thought he'd make the team out of camp, but... — Ghost River 17:57, 6 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Continued review

Please mention Frost's mother Dana [1]
You do not need ETA in brackets because it is never used again
Change Zach Senyshyn to Zachary Senyshyn to bypass the redirect
- HickoryOughtShirt?4 Everything has been addressed; thank you! — Ghost River 19:57, 9 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  - GhostRiver, passing. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:19, 9 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]