Talk:Monster (Lady Gaga song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Blackjacks101 (talk) 18:27, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Comments
Lead
- from her third EP The Fame Monster. - add comma before "The Fame Monster
- Gaga has majorly performed "Monster" on her 2009–10 The Monster Ball Tour, where she included a blood soaked performance, which was criticized
at Manchester in the United Kingdom - doesn't sound or flow well, maybe like "Gaga has performed "Monster" mostly on her ...."
Summary Great Job, Legolas! You did a good job on this article, especially since at one point it definitely didn't deserve one. If you finish these easy requests then I'll pass it. --Blackjacks101 (talk) 18:39, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
- Rescuing a crap-class article has always been my repertoire. Lol. I rephrased the lead, to your liking dude. — Legolas (talk2me) 18:52, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
- Lol, I see that now =D. Congratz on another GA--Blackjacks101 (talk) 18:55, 26 December 2010 (UTC)