Talk:Monster (Kanye West song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jennie--x (talk · contribs) 21:31, 28 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The lead is four paragraphs long which is the maximum for an article of any size. This article isn't particularly long; could this be merged and edited to comply with WP:LEAD? Three paragraphs would probably be sufficient enough

Done

"In his deepest, most intimidating voice" sounds very journalistic and certainly isn't encyclopedic, this needs changing.

GA review Final Summary
It is reasonably well written. a (Is there clear sentences, spelling and grammar?): Y b (Does it comply with MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists?): Y It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (Is there a references section?): Y b (Are there citations for quotes/statistics/challenging info?): Y c (Does it contain no original research?): Y It is broad in its coverage. a (Does it cover the major aspects of the topic?): Y b (Does it use summary style?): Y It follows the neutral point of view policy. (Are points made with due weight?): Y It is stable. (Are there no edit wars, etc?): Y It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (Do the images have appropriate fair-use rationales?): Y b (Do the images have suitable captions?): Y
Overall: Pass/Fail: Pass
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Fixed the lead, and removed the questionable sentence. Bruce Campbell (talk) 21:14, 4 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]