Talk:Mongolia at the 2010 Winter Olympics/GA1
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 01:06, 20 May 2018 (UTC)
Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 01:06, 20 May 2018 (UTC)
- "73rd, by" Comma is unnecessary.
- Link the NOC in the prose.
- Looking at the picture, there are four people in the delegation if you include coaches.
- So when did the two events take place?
- For numbers less than ten, spell out the word.
Just a few things. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 02:18, 20 May 2018 (UTC)
- Everything done except for the middle point. I can't find any RSes discussing the delegation details, so who is marching with the athletes is a bit of a mystery. Courcelles (talk) 13:30, 20 May 2018 (UTC)
- Pinging Nova Crystallis, forgot to do it in my first edit. Courcelles (talk) 14:23, 20 May 2018 (UTC)