Talk:Mongolia at the 2006 Winter Olympics/GA1
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 16:44, 30 July 2018 (UTC)
Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 16:44, 30 July 2018 (UTC)
- "eomen's 10 kilometers classical"
- "represent Mongolia at the 2010 Winter Olympics" Missing period at the end.
- Avoid starting consecutive sentences with the same word.
- "kilometre" should not be plural because of the event name.
- Maybe you should mention who won the events, like other articles.
That's it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 21:19, 30 July 2018 (UTC)
Everything done but the winners which I cannot do on a phone. Will do in a couple hours. Courcelles (talk) 22:03, 30 July 2018 (UTC)
- And now added the gold medalists and their times. Courcelles (talk) 01:21, 31 July 2018 (UTC)