Talk:Mongolia at the 1994 Winter Olympics/GA1
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Reviewer: Nova Chrysalia (talk · contribs) 16:57, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
At #WikiConferenceNA.
- "24th place, and" Comma unnecessary.
- Any info on the closing ceremony?
- "He was entered into two events" Remove was.
- Switch the comma with a colon.
- "fellow SOuth" Caps.
That's it. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 16:57, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
- Nothing on the closing ceremony, I'm afraid, the information about flagbearers for these Olympics has disappeared into the ether. Thanks for the review, everything else has been taken care of. Courcelles (talk) 17:01, 19 October 2018 (UTC)